Monday, July 28, 2014

An Empty Sea Comments

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She had to go back - we knew this even as
She came -
Running on the evening-sand rendered crimson
And swaying, broke into my arms like
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Piyush Dey
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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 23 August 2014

So poignant is this lovely piece elegantly scripted with metaphor so excellently employed to rhyme it prodigious.... Vows melting down Moon dying down And sea on the shore left empty and sunken to the abyss unknown........Piyush.....you are amazing....10/10

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