Tuesday, July 11, 2006

An Empty Heart Comments

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an empty heart, doesnt care
an empty heart has, no love to share

an empty heart, is a lonely one
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sandy nobody
COMMENTS
David Harris 21 July 2014

A lovely poem, sad but all too often true. congratulations, you're able to put your feelings into words.

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Matthew C. L. Pratt 06 June 2009

No one has an empty heart

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I AM SOOO OUT OF HERE 12 June 2008

I've known a few people with the empty heart you speak of..and it is sad. So glad it's not you also. AIAB

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Patti Bonilla 30 October 2007

Your poem is so true! I can't help it Sandy, I'm in education so here it goes.. a empty heart is incorrect- it should say an empty heart-other than that-your poem expresses love. Keep writing girl! let your soul speak!

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Charley60 K 24 January 2007

Sandy this is a very good write. Describes perfectly how one who can't love or never to be satisfied for their heart is empty-they have no heart. I am like you in this-that I am glad I don't have an empty heart.

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Jim Foulk 15 December 2006

NICE POEM IT IS NICE EVEN WITH THE A EMPTY HEART, IT IS WHAT YOU FEEL IT IS YOUR HEART REACHING OUT TO SOMEONE YOU LOVE, THAT IS WHAT MATTERS.

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Sam Sayegh 16 August 2006

hey sandy...ur poem is great especially when reaching its end...' im glad '..but between us...u always mention ' A EMPTY HEART'.... shouldny it be ' AN empty heart? ? ''..sorry for bothering...thanks

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Graham Jones 11 July 2006

Wonderful little write.

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