Thursday, November 10, 2005

An Empty Ear Is Eden Comments

Rating: 4.3

Those little innuendoes first
just niggle, then they make us thirst
for something.... what we can't explain
until some insight gives it name
...
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Linda Hepner
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Moon Batchelder 07 September 2006

i am in love with your muse...whose inspirations fills your pen with such exquisite insights in rhyme

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Kelly Allen Vinal 11 November 2005

Much hidden in these lines - kudos!

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David Gerardino 10 November 2005

LIKE the poem, the odd part is, that some really good poems comes from this nonsence.............

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***** ********* 10 November 2005

Believe nothing you read and only half of what you hear, is advice I have acted upon. It helps! Nice slice of life. All the best Tai I rated it, not sure if it was a 9 or a 10.

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Raynette Eitel 10 November 2005

Oh Linda, you have a way of describing what makes us uncomfortable, if not furious. This short poem says it well. Thanks. Raynette

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