An Emptiness Comments

Wonderfully framed poem!! Great work!!

Lonely and desolate with the emotions of life. Nice work.

When some misunderstanding arises between loved ones, especially between siblings, it can create an wound! It will heal very fast, but the scar may remain for some more time! Remeber, only our close ones can really pain us! The notes of disharmony that can naturally arise from time to time in a relatioship is beautifully resonated in this poem!

Touching poem. Both sides are at fault here. Generally, we call this sulking and it happens due to the pain body we all carry with us from the haunting past. Eckhart Tolle has analyzed this phenomenon well in his books. Thanks for sharing this.

A beautiful poem that has a lesson in it too. Thanks for sharing, Jaishree.