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She runs breathing hard
Branches draw blood as she tears them apart
Tears dancing in her face
Eyes gleaming with the light of the moon
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Despite needing to remember when to use its vs it's, I give you five stars. bri : )
stanza 4 and the last stanza also: 'its' (possesive) , not 'it's'. Its one of the more common typos I've seen. Ha! Did you NOTICE that I used 'its' where I SHOULD have used 'it's'? ? ? I'm teasing. bri ;)
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7/22/2025 10:09:56 PM # 1.0.0
Meredith, p.s. You left me a very nice poem comment on, I think, my 'old' Fun-eral poem. Thanks. : ) bri