Tuesday, January 16, 2018

An Emotional Anomaly Comments

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Pains are our friends.
Tears that come on pains are the relievers.
Pains remind us we have a wound.
Sometimes given by someone we know
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Akhtar Jawad
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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 January 2018

Tears that die like an infant died in the womb like a bud that could not spring in a flower like a cloud that rose from the sea but could not rain on the earth......touching expression! Appreciated your powerful feelings that you have encapsulated in this captivating write! Thanks dear sir for sharing!

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Siddartha Montik 22 January 2018

very Beautiful Verses Poet.. Liked all the Emotions expressed in the Simple Stanzas..! ! 10+

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 January 2018

A poignant beautifully crafted write. A thought provoking that it goes to the core of the heart. A lot of words in this poem leave indelible impressions in the mind of a reader.10

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Abhilasha Bhatt 16 January 2018

A beautifully written excerpt from the book of heart.....loved it :)

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