Thursday, May 7, 2015

An Emo's Mind Comments

Rating: 5.0

I sit in the dark. A shadow to my sins.
Cuts all over but where does it begin.
The pain falls everywhere but stronger inside,
No one understands so in darkness I hide.
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Kay Staley 16 September 2015

Beautiful. Dark and disturbingly realistic, with a heart wrenching perspective that feels so real. My face screws into a mournful look of understanding as I read the words. Great job with the imagery of the cuts, and the comparison of a work of art, with the knife being the brush. How natural and lovely you make something so dark sound. Very easy to relate too; good simple language with such deep feelings behind it. This is by far the best poem I have read on this sight for weeks. Please post more, I will read every word that you say.

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Kieren Adams 07 May 2015

as the title suggests it is regarding the day to day experience of an emo.

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