Saturday, January 21, 2017

An Emetic Comments

Rating: 3.9

Conjoining back to back, staying on the moustache. The blind's nasal cascades, are crystal transparent.

Those who'll hate, burn in the hell. And you should further tell. Raised from milk, raised from butter. The blind's nasal cascades, are crystal transparent.
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Jazib Kamalvi
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Keshab Mansukhani 02 August 2022

Love the flow.

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Anna 05 July 2022

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Nabakishore Dash 03 July 2022

Congrats for POD.

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Congratulations, Poet Jazib Kamalvi. Today, this poem is featured as the Modern Poem of The Day on PoemHunter. Most prestigious recognition. Let this happen more often.

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A B Faniki 04 September 2019

Iintriguing***

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Jazib Kamalvi 04 September 2019

Thanks again, Dear Faniki.

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A B Faniki 04 September 2019

An intresting and intriguinf piece. I have pick bit and piece of I mages that I can relate.tanks

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Jazib Kamalvi 04 September 2019

Thank you so much, Faniki, for this favour.

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Bri Edwards 30 September 2018

(cont.) from Poet' Notes: adjective: profligate 1. recklessly extravagant or wasteful in the use of resources. synonyms: wasteful, extravagant, spendthrift, improvident, prodigal i enjoy humour/humor, but irony and satire and other forms of symbolism are not my cup of tea; i don't always recognize them or understand them; therefor i do not often appreciate them. bri :)

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Jazib Kamalvi 05 October 2018

Thanks again, Bri Edwards.

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Bri Edwards 30 September 2018

(cont.) e·met·ic adjective 1. (of a substance) causing vomiting. informal nauseating or revolting. that emetic music in department stores noun noun: emetic; plural noun: emetics 1. a medicine or other substance that causes vomiting. (cont.)

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Jazib Kamalvi 05 October 2018

Thanks for the nice suggestions.

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Bri Edwards 30 September 2018

blind's nasal cascades? ? is blind referring to a blind person? nasal cascades? are you speaking of watery discharge from one's nose? really, are you? now to read more. for mouses i'd use mice. (cont.)

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Jazib Kamalvi 05 October 2018

Yes Bri. You are right. Thanks.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 June 2018

Christmas spirit binds us It closes the gap Among us Even just for the meantime And our hearts Beat as one As we celebrate The birth of Jesus Christ...... So touching and amusing expression. Interesting to read. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Jazib Kamalvi 07 July 2018

Thank you so much, Mahakul gi.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 January 2018

Biscuit-like colour, dazzles every eye. Two lusty damsels, as waving lonely. The blind's nasal cascades, are crystal transparent......Scintillating expression! I liked it..Thanks for sharing!

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Jazib Kamalvi 20 January 2018

Thank you very much, Dr, for your lovely poetic comments.

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Rajendra Rout 12 May 2018

I agree with you Dillip sir.it is a lovely poem

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 August 2017

Amusing depiction. Humorous one. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.

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Jazib Kamalvi 26 August 2017

Thank you very much, Mahakul gi.

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Akhtar Jawad 20 April 2017

Enjoyed this humorous poem that was presented in a very profligate gathering. The gathering would have enjoyed a lot.

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Jazib Kamalvi 20 April 2017

No doubt there were explosions of laughters. You may like its urdu version (Qe Awar) . Thanks for approving.

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