Monday, April 20, 2015

An Embroidered Quilt And The Woven Dreams Comments

Rating: 4.3

On the foot side of his bed
Was neatly kept folded
An embroidered quilt.
As the poet gently lay down
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Khairul Ahsan
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Khairul Ahsan 26 August 2019

Dear @Khatemon Chowdhury and @Debbie Rebeiro (Neel Pori) (My friends from a Facebook Group) , Thank you so very much for visiting my page and leaving a kind comment each, that inspired me a lot. Much appreciate your thoughtfulness.

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The sad truth of women's lives especially in developing countries. Beautifully written. Thank you.

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Khatemon Chowdhury 26 August 2019

Beautiful poem. It took me to the world of imagination. Well done Khairul Ahsan.

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Masterpiece, perfect poetry, only you could write like this, must be read by all, could be included in academic poems, dramatic and it's speaks the value of labour, honest dedication, immeasurable imagination of the artist, marvellous sir, I need to try atleast one poem like you, pls bless me, thanks for the share.

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Khairul Ahsan 26 August 2019

Oh I am overwhelmed by the high praise you showered on me, dear poet @V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy! You are already a Blessed poet, each of your poems stands as a glaring testimony. Thank you very, very much for these kind, inspiring words.

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Amitava Sur 29 April 2015

A heart touching write with emotions and involvement.Loved the way you described with sentiment. The quilt she embroidered With dreams she nurtured weaving a safe path Protecting her nest..... She was dreaming a smile In her baby's face, Lighting a lamp in her hut. Needle was moving faster in the linen To make her safe as fast.

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Khairul Ahsan 26 August 2019

Your reading the poem and the kind words of appreciation you've left here inspired me greatly, dear @Amitava Sur. Your lines also clearly show how deeply you thought about the poem. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.

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Lyn Paul 20 April 2015

Such beautiful words. I felt touch whilst reading. Thank You too for your notes.

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Khairul Ahsan 26 August 2019

Thank you Lyn, for reading my poem and appreciating it. You liked my notes too, that's an extra inspiration. Much obliged.

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