Wednesday, May 7, 2014

An Ellipse Not A Circle Comments

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I am an orbiting point,
I am moving in a way such that,
The sum of my distances from two fixed points,
The left and right focal points,
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Khalida Bano Ali 28 December 2016

A philosophic poem, ..........................................................................

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Valsa George 02 July 2014

There are twin forces pulling man from opposite sides... that of evil and of good. No man can be all evil nor completely virtuous... We have to strike a desirable balance! A well thought out poem!

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Sarmad Mirza 09 May 2014

a very very mathematical poem but being a student of maths I grasped it.

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Matthias Pantaleon 09 May 2014

Wow! This comes from your inner depth and displayed a great skills. I love how you think my dear poet friend.

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Matthias Pantaleon 09 May 2014

Wow! This comes from your inner depth and display great skillmanship. I love how you think my dear poet friend. Nice piece from a thoughtful soul. Bravo!

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Kevin Patrick 07 May 2014

Oh Almighty God! I don't desire to become an angel, Chances are there I shall become a devil. True words have never been spoken of the human condition, the duality of our natures is such that we try to be one but become the other. Great metaphors a super read!

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