Thursday, April 5, 2018

An Elephant And The Ant Comments

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Leaving large oceans for the large whales
O you the proud elephant! Largest on the land,
You look amazing sleeping in a standing position
Pity on you, when you fall you never stand!
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Akhtar Jawad
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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 16 April 2018

Thanks very much for the beautifully crafted, rhythmic message to the human beings by far. Congrats on your becoming the member's PoD.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 April 2018

Many congratulations for this wonderful poem being chosen as POD!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 15 April 2018

Akhtar Sahab! Once again, Heartiest Congratulations! Strength can never be attributed by evaluating the the size of a person or an animal. Little ones like the ant can be be more powerful or painful. This poem reminds me of the Panchatantra stories that teaches man wisdom. Thank you.

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Geetha Jayakumar 15 April 2018

Beautiful poem with a great message - one shouldn't consider others as weak. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing. Congratulations on member poem of the day!

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Rajnish Manga 15 April 2018

The poem reminds us of a grave truth that might of the powerful cannot be taken for granted. Human history is full of such stories and lessons to this effect. The underlying philosophy and the overall presentation is greatly impressive. Thanks, Sir.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 April 2018

A single ant can force you to fall on the ground........though ant is small creature yet it can do many wonderful works and on the other hand large animal like elephant can do nothing to ant. A beautiful poem shared. Thanks and and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.

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Anil Kumar Panda 15 April 2018

One should not ignore the power of weak. Collectively they can wreak havoc in enemy's camp. A nice poem with a great message. Thanks for posting and Congrats.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 15 April 2018

Oh this is mightier than the elephant in subject.......Akhtarji.........very well scripted and insightful........thanks for sharing.......10++++++

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 April 2018

This poem is worth being revisited. It is embedded with great wisdom. Congratulations, Akhtar. Another gem is added to your golden pen.

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Francie Lynch 15 April 2018

Goliath realized the same too late.

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 15 April 2018

Congratulations my friend of winning the literary jackpot today. That's a wonderful poem and an incredible picture, which shows the strength and the power of an elephant, and yet an ant is amazingly strong too. Nice poem!

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Bharati Nayak 15 April 2018

Ants are not so weak as you think They live in a highly sophisticated society Their brotherhood, equity and hard working May become for you a source of anxiety- - - -Might is not always right.One's pride may lead him for a downfall.One should not disregard the small and downtrodden. Congratulations again for the Poem of the Day.

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Valsa George 15 April 2018

Congratulations on this beautiful poem chosen as the poem of the day!

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Loke Kok Yee 15 April 2018

Everything have their place in this world. Your wisdom shines in this poem Congrats and thank you sir.

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Savita Tyagi 15 April 2018

Lovely poem. Smallest of living being of this creation can teach us a lesson. Congratulations Akhtar Ji for member poem place.

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Hassan Hayati 15 April 2018

Ants really can be the symbol of hard work, struggle, hope, many other good specifications, congratulations for being chosen as poem of the day.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 15 April 2018

What a beautiful reality of an elephant's life theory I also wrote on an elephant you know but 'twas different congrats sir you are flying high in the sky some day I may also try and pass your way have a happy day...

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Rini Shibu 15 April 2018

Congratulations for poem of the day, well deserves Never underestimate anyone...enjoyed reading

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Bernard F. Asuncion 15 April 2018

Dear poet Akhtar, such a superb poem of the day.... congrats for being chosen.... huge 10+++++

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Robert Murray Smith 15 April 2018

Akhtar, a superb write. At last a wonderful nature and philosophical poem for POD.

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