Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Thursday, March 4, 2010

An Element Of Surprise Comments

Rating: 4.8

There is element of surprise
Even it is in sudden demise
Why does the sun always rise?
It can stay at home otherwise
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mark Nwagwu 15 March 2010

this write touches all the bases of human experience and the vagaries of life. Great, my friend; simply great. Surprise, surprise, that is certain!

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Sahar Sahar 15 March 2010

there are surprises to bulge out of the amazement when things get unusual with suddenness......very interesting write 10+++++

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 12 March 2010

Every thing has an optimum time … but we must not keep our fingers crossed … Tamas Gunha people may take it as a plea … work out weak up be in vibe of own’s faith … ‘Virr Bhogya Vasundhara’ only courageous enjoy world … As usual punch of edu …in it with moral aesthetics … thanks Sir… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Elena Sandu 11 March 2010

A ten plus ten smiles for the lovely surprise! Thank you!

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Brenda Arroyo 11 March 2010

A lovely poem... I agree most heartidly...

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Great poem, i give you 9 per cent.Just great

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Gul naz 07 March 2010

Nothing comes out of despair or hope Sometimes you may have to walk on tight rope God has given us strength to change the direction Go with firm determination and resolute action ! ! ! i loved these lines

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Ravi Sathasivam 06 March 2010

'Nothing comes out of despair or hope Sometimes you may have to walk on tight rope God has given us strength to change the direction Go with firm determination and resolute action..' Well said here. A strong perspective poem. Well done. Enjoyed reading it

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A powerful perspective my friend. Keep up the good works.

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John Oconnell 05 March 2010

you certainly know this world and life. great optimism.john

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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