Tuesday, August 11, 2009

An Elegy To The Clouds Comments

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O! clouds beyond a human’s grasp,
What could it be that moves you so?
Can something this alive in mass,
Be shot with just a windy bow,
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Wesley Mincin 12 August 2009

You've got fans, Laz. lol You know my rating.

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Patti Masterman 11 August 2009

Will you give me some lessons? ''whisper to me a lesson...' I want to write like this: 'Must be the champion of the sky. And gatekeeper to all above it- Deciding when the sun shall shine, Shrouding stars upon a whim, While dressing moonlight, end to end- Gathering for a blizzard.' Sorry I can't paste the whole poem in this little box- but I wanted to. This is one of the most beautiful poems I've ever read. Fitting that it is about clouds, which are so malleable that our own minds cannot keep hold of them for very long- they keep changing before our eyes into one illusion after another. Great stuff!

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