An Elegy On Two Little Stars Comments

Very sad and touching poem. We can just pray May their soul rest in peace and may their parents recover from this shock, as they might have woven many dreams for their children. It's really painful for the parents.

an amazingly beautiful poem....

A touching tale and very well written, Dinesh. It leaves one saddened.

Virtue and vice both are remembered, virtue gives pain a sad story poem nice thank you sir

A very sad and poignant story Dinesh, very well related by you.

The story of Aditya and Ayush is so heart rending and here it is narrated in such a manner that those two brothers will linger long in the memory of the readers.... Losing children at such a tender age is something unbearable and if they have been such sweet kids with so much of a compassionate disposition, they must have been the darlings of the neighbourhood! Though they are strangers to us, their loss hangs heavily on us! So imagine the mental agony of those unfortunate parents and the people with whom they have associated! ! A moving write! !

Your poem remembers them like they are there. Their positive attitude lives to be followed. Thank you for the deep concern expressed.