An Eerie Tune Comments

Sometimes there is no criticism to be given to a poem. There is no perfect one but everyone has their own interpretation of the way they read it. When i read this poem I felt the fear you were trying to prevail to the protagonist. Well choice of words. Nicely rhyming lines and the syllables are evenly matched to make a good flow. I didnt have to reread a verse to understand what you were trying to say. But I do believe the way you wrote the poem that it might also make it better to put into a 3rd person perspective to get the point across a little better. Good job. I give it a 9.