Yours is the first email I opened this morning.
I appreciate your suggested revisions and invitation
to send the work back once I've made the changes.
I can tell you spent a lot of time analyzing my efforts.
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For rejection yes .. for re-vision? This marks him as an egotistical twit. He has been given more encouragement than he deserves. This doggerel form would be better served as a regular verse.