Sunday, August 3, 2008

An Echo Comments

Rating: 5.0

sounding off the far mountain wall,
bouncing back quieter and softer.
more beautiful with each fainter repetition
and more sad too, the original brightness fading and slowly dying
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Jilted BUTTERFLY
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Sarwar Chowdhury 13 August 2008

Excellent indeed......10

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Ershad Mazumder 03 August 2008

This is really a poem. Excellant job.

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Blessing Nanier 03 August 2008

very lovely.in fact i even lack words to describe it

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Dorothy- A. Holmes 03 August 2008

My Dear, Quiet and so lovely! Dorothy

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Oh, how many messages, how many echoes can be read into this softly, exquisitely penned, pensive piece.... you're talented and I look forward to reading more. t x

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