PART 1 - THE HOSPITAL ROOM
The room, consumed in mournful silence
Labored breathing echoes between the concrete walls
Out in the lobby, plenty of action, in here it feels timeless
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I had just finished reading your poetic novella and had given you a glowing review. PH had posted my rating, but I can't seem to find my comments. Hoping that they find them and post them again!
2) So, my friend, I would say that this is a magnum opus. And I'll be revisiting this masterpiece when I go camping again. Excellent job, Poet Rebb!
No sandwich. No beer. Just my morning espresso and Elvis singing gospel songs. Shades of Kerouac, Bukowski, Cohen and Thomas Merton. And, of course, Thoreau.
I will savour this one over the holidays with great food and beer. In the interim, I'll be reading some of your shorter ones. Merry Christmas, Poet Rebb!
Excellent read.