..........An Earthy Paradise.... Comments

You seem to have the true meaning.

romantic. fantastic. poetic.

Amazing love poem.10+++

Those four opening lines are fantastic...lovely tribute you pay to your Love, Little...loved yor write...10

great feeling, fantastic poem

Lovely wishes...... superb love poem friend! 10/10.. Ali

'Let us see our daughters blooming like daisy and narcissus flowers This would be an earthy paradise' Stunning 10

a beautiful passionated poem sunshine

i envious. i wont lie.. i want a lady to write me this too. beautiful

dear the life is a beautiful paradise, when u want it beautiful place, , that what i know, we have to look at this world through a beautiful eyes and a beautiful mind just like yours. nice poem especially 'never want to be awaken till I hear the laughter of you and our daughters playing around' really it is made me hopeful :) cheers up dear

Well this is a good read thanks for the share

May Paradise find you, may your love always be true, may your babies be beautiful just like you, best wishes your friend Andrew 10

what a beautiful and inspiring poem this is..amazing write my friend truly