Sunday, March 25, 2012

An Earth`s Spirit Comments

Rating: 4.9

Around the Earth are light and people`s thoughts,
They fill its spirit, keep the planet`s mind.
It looks at us, of love and wisdom knots,
When we try them in our breast to find.
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Kateryna Polishchuk
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Hans Vr 30 March 2012

The wonderful wisdom we all can tune into and who is around us all the time. Fantastic write

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Danny Draper 28 March 2012

A nice write, economy of words and some interesting placements as juxtaposition or contrast make it original and the idea that we are all light a great metaphor for hope and reason and creativity.

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Harindhar Reddy 28 March 2012

Holy Cow and Holy Stone! I can see though this poem looks it is about a good person or god but if we do deep we can see this poet is speaking about the spirits and muses which was done by Blake long ago and this poet is now carrying his legacy...... to the poet for writing this poem Thumbs Up!

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Wahab Abdul 26 March 2012

the peoples thoughts are the lights.....and fill the world............we feel those in our hearts...................nice poem, this is your best poem....i love it.....well said and well written, kudos to you.

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Dave Walker 25 March 2012

A really wonderful poem, like it.

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