Friday, January 20, 2017

An Earthquake Mountains Moves Comments

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a body of stone
mass motionless
stasis stored gravity
an immoveable mountain
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Terence George Craddock
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Mj Lemon 07 February 2017

This is a great metaphor...the most rock solid stubbornness, seemingly immutable, can be reduced to ruble, perhaps through willpower.

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Terry Craddock 07 February 2017

this was a fun write, a fast write, facing the avalanche, sometimes there is a buzz in the writing which stays in the words, the wow what a ride moments

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