Friday, September 6, 2013

An Eagle And A Chick. Comments

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I plead with you, sir, while you circle,
around my mother who is frightened, but not a coward,
When you carry me to greater height,
And put me on the branch of not velvet,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Kanniappan Kanniappan 12 September 2013

Wonderful poem with pleading chick, Kill me first and have your feast in delight! I get tears in my eyes!

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Savita Tyagi 07 September 2013

Painful plead of a chick! heartbreaking! Sadly eagles do not heed to cries of the weak neither do humans. First one kills for hunger, the second kills for pleasure. Worst of its kind. So sensitive and good write.

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Geetha Jayakumar 07 September 2013

A Beautiful write Veeraiyah. Pleas of innocent victims is heard through out the poem..Loved it..

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 07 September 2013

that's a wonderful way, Veeraiyah, to look at it from the victim's side! the sad pleading too is not lost.

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Valsa George 07 September 2013

The heart rending plea of a small chick to the predator eagle! It can be interpreted as the helpless cry of all innocent victims struggling under the talons of evil! ! A great write! !

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Heather Wilkins 06 September 2013

a painful cry of the chick a good read

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 06 September 2013

The plead is heartrending. Powerfully delivered. Thank you.

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