Sunday, June 29, 2014

An Axiom Of Choice Comments

Rating: 5.0

So much time has elapsed,
So much has happened to me,
So much water has gone under the bridge,
And I don't think
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Jasbir Chatterjee
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Fabrizio Frosini 24 July 2015

ne è passata d'acqua sotto i ponti... So much water has gone under the bridge.. greetings from Italy ;)

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Hannington Mumo 09 May 2015

I pray that the loneliness gets ended by some chanceful stroke of luck. The persona, your good composition so well expounds, is an extremely lonesome soul. A well-dictioned piece that deserves the highest rating possible…

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Rajnish Manga 16 November 2014

You came out of the predecament successfully and that shows in this lovely poem. The longing that once was intense gave way to a formal relationship. This is known as Dil mile ya na mile, Haath milaate rahiye

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Amitava Sur 27 August 2014

Jasbir, a lovely poem in deed. You were in an apprehension so was in the axiom, but good that at last you proved it to be right, and now being a changed girl I am sure you are all right.

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Akhtar Jawad 02 July 2014

Matchin one set with other one, according to your choice, I undertand: - first set] (sweet, saltish, sour) second set](Akhtar, Jasbir, none) My choice]As above Your choice](Saltish, Sweet, none) The similarity is (none) as the last member.

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