God didnt promise 
Days without Pain 
Laughter without Sorrow 
and Sun without Rain
                
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Really, really, really great poem, great flow, and really good idea! kev
Melissa - a wonderful poem and a lovely flow of language. I lookd forward to reading more of your poems Terry
God didnt promise Days without Pain Laughter without Sorrow and Sun without Rain But He did promise Stregnth for the Day Comfort for the Tears and Light for the Way.. Hi you make a good poem, with great visions and shadow of life, wish for best
Realy it is great poem from any asspect, i can't say nothing more.keep it up!

 
                     
                
The best I've read from you thus far, Melissa. Demonstrates a high level of maturity and wisdom.