Tuesday, July 12, 2016

An Awaken Ocean-Woman On A Shore Of Sleep Comments

Rating: 4.5

Her eyes are more profound
Than all other dreaming and darkening eyes
And her sleeps are even deeper
Than the gentlest of all the sleeps
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir
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M Asim Nehal 13 July 2016

Superb poem, two vast things are compared in this poem, the ocean - so deep, so calm and have many seen and unseen hidden things under/ beneath. Women, another mysterious creation of the Almighty, nobody knows what they have, how they feel and the vastness of love they shower on offspring and progeny.

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Thanks Asim Nehal sahib!

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