Many have died, many have perished
But this man has yet to fall
Gone for months, time that is cherished
Yet he still answers the call
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I really like your poem- the rhyming seemed a little forced in some places (but you should have seen when i tried to rhyme 'purple' for my mom's bday) but other than that i really liked it- specially cuz it was bout ur dad
Aw, wish i felt as good about my father as you do yours lol. great poem! very good and very spirited.
elegang flow and ending, nice poem Glaedr the poet.
A fantastic tribute to the most underrated hero in our nation's history. Long overdue recognition. And thank your Dad for me. Best, Don