Friday, November 11, 2011

An Autumn Day Comments

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Floating all night on waves of clouds
Searching for what life enshrouds
Woke in the morning to the misty dew
Lost in thought of the day anew.
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Hazel Connelly
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Jasbir Chatterjee 07 April 2014

You really write well, Hazel...The exuberance of autumn really flows out of the poem...I also have a similar poem on my page, Autumn of the year 1988.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 12 September 2012

The first few stanzas reminded me of when I was a kid and did an early morning paper round.Thanks for the memories.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 11 November 2011

Colourful piece.

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