Saturday, September 12, 2009

An Authentic Love Comments

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An authentic love
For the tunes
A reason to get up
In the afternoon
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Ahmad Shiddiqi
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Louis Rams 26 September 2009

may that bridge spread throughout the world

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Eyan Desir 24 September 2009

Good write...10s....................

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Ruerd Visser 22 September 2009

Well said in only a few lines you open up a whole world waiting to be dsicovered. Thanks for sharing it with us! Boomwhisperer Ruerd

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Omar Ibrahim 22 September 2009

build a brige between love and life....i loved this line.....good poem my friend

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Rafique Farooqi 18 September 2009

bridge between love and life.................a meaningful poem to read

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Noel Horlanda 18 September 2009

short but briefly composed and full of meaning. If you know how to breath the air that surrounds you then you have life and if you have life then you know how to give love...simple as that.

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 17 September 2009

A truth of love. it gives us a reason to live...lets share it with the whole world!

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Anjali Sinha 17 September 2009

short and sweet good write...........

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Juan Carlos Abeti 15 September 2009

good one, short an direct.

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Kuji Soliman 15 September 2009

very very nice poem ahmad....very nice

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Fay Slimm 13 September 2009

The most 'authentic love ' is the one which builds bridges.... this is a fine point made in a fine verse..... Fay

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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