Friday, May 29, 2015

An Attempted Romance Comments

Rating: 5.0

The naughty sprinkler of the old sky,
Looks in a mood of play and romance,
The stale kite isn’t too old to fly,
Come on kite flier for a song and dance,
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Kavya . 10 June 2015

beautiful poem with a glimpse of romance at the onset of rain - rainy season is indeed romantic giving way for Makeup, shakeup, crush recessing.

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Geetha Jayakumar 01 June 2015

A Beautiful poem, enjoying the company of grandchildren. Loved reading it.

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Valsa George 29 May 2015

Grandchildren are ready for a lovely outing, They look smart in colorful dressing, Recollect the days of rainbow sprouting, Makeup, shakeup, crush recessing! You seem to bubble with enthusiasm in the company of your grand children! How quick you have been turned into another child!

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Khalida Bano Ali 29 May 2015

A beauty of rimes.......................10

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