Tuesday, June 6, 2017

An Atheist And The Amusement Train Comments

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My trip to amusement park started
with a journey by train
running on a circular path on the rails.
I noticed so many who were talking about destination
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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 February 2018

It's a journey in that there is no destination/It runs on the rails/just rotates/and comes back on the starting point……pragmatic expression! It’s a beautiful poem. Loved reading it!

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Loke Kok Yee 25 June 2017

When you start your life's journey, it is important to pick the right train and driver otherwise you will end up nowhere. Thank you sir.

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Bri Edwards 13 June 2017

I asked him that where the destination of the train is..........i don't see the 'need' for that in this line. i enjoyed the poem, but i don't understand the significance [if there is any] of using an atheist as the driver. ? ? ? bri :) to MyPoemList..............even though i don't understand about the driver!

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Khalida Bano Ali 07 June 2017

Life is like an amusement train running on nature's railways, their should be an ethics and discipline in our lives, but we should not be obstinate in imposing our ethics and discipline on others.

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