A bird has been shot;
By an arrow of hatred,
Falling from the skies,
Like a kite with no strings attached!
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This is by any standard a fine piece of poetry......Tabish........I congratulate you for your creativity........10
Wow a nice poem with beautiful array of words- -A bird has been shot; By an arrow of hatred, thanks for share
Hey! Nice piece. Hatred is like locking someone in prison and turn around to realise that person was you... Thanks.
A lovely piece of poetry well articulated and penned in poetic diction. Hatred is a very big emotional load carried by the one that hates. A nice piece written with insight to capture the conviction of the poet. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.