Friday, July 22, 2011

An Arrow Comments

Rating: 5.0

We listen to many things
in our willingness to learn.
Our teachers guide us
to the knowledge,
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David Harris
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 22 July 2011

Excellent poem with a lot of depth. Fine and vivid imagery. The poem has a strong structure. I like and rate it 10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A world of treason' on page 4. Thanks in advance. Warm regards Akmal

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