Wednesday, May 31, 2006
An Argument For Sleep Comments
Rating: ★5.0
I intended to write a poem of time.
The celestial seesaw
of sun and moon
toe-tapping the earth
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Lori Boulard
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Scarlett Treat
31 May 2006
From a scribbler in vain, long after sleep, words serving as kindling for the hearth...I love this poem, Lori...Well Done!
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10/20/2025 4:21:35 PM # 1.0.0
Go, Lori! I like this lots - you know the score. Just a thought: consider beginning a new stanza right after 'It is written' - I think this will lend the poem more impact (?) But it's your baby, and as such it is pretty dang perfect as is. Esther : ]