Thursday, April 12, 2007

! An Ardent Wish For Others Comments

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How ardently, now, I wish for others
what I –alas too late – wish -
would have wished - for my own self,
and maybe, for my parents too:
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Michael Shepherd
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Not a member No 4 24 April 2007

The lessons in life that we learn too late should be passed on somehow, but yet it's only when they're learned directly - too late - that they're valued. Those who've still to learn them often can't 'hear' them until they're ready. Incorporating such lessons into the cycle of life is so difficult; we evolve so slowly; and steps such as this, posting wisdom in the public doman, are part of our evolution. Your wish will be realised somewhere down the line Michael for it has great merit, and this fine poem may served to aid the process. Its ardency gives your words poetic power. Regards, jim.

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Scarlett Treat 12 April 2007

As I have lost both my parents, I now think of a million things I wish that I had asked them...and now cannot. If only.....

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Linda Ori 12 April 2007

You make a valid point, Michael. We get so caught up in our own individual lives that often we fail to realize just how important those connecting moments are. Then we wonder why our children do the things they do - maybe because we weren't there for them as much as we could have been. I think it's a curse of the modern day world - so much to do, so little time. Often we lose track of our priorities, namely family and friends. Then we can only say......'I wish I had.......' Linda

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Patrick Toland 12 April 2007

A better thing to do on Valentines Day! - reminds me of a quote about poets - 'we make our bread from questions unasked, unsaid'

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Danny Reynolds 12 April 2007

Yearly? I'd risk it daily, and hope the regularity did not devalue the benefits. Danny

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Michael Shepherd

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