An Apple Of Love! Comments

Wow, it's a lovely poem, beautiful description. subtle and simple.

The imagery in this poem worths a king's ransom, reading poems of this quality is my cup of tea! Well expressed A1+++++

What a fate to the lovely read apple, pierced by both and then withdrawn! ! Ha Ha... next time, you don't pierce and spoil, better you eat and see it says! ! Loved it. | Delete this message

A beautiful light hearted write about the apple of love striking poets hearts, an apple is the symbol of temptation! Great write!

Is that not the apple of Adam and Eve? Very yummy.... I mean a very yummy poem. Delightful to eat, nay, to read!

Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

a(nn) apple Red apple we want to eat Haunting by love The sweet smell it bring to us How juicy to taste

don't ever catch together that tempting red lovely apple.... great work

Loved the metaphor of the red apple! Lesson........ Never let the apple to be pierced by many arrows from all sides! Enjoyed this hilarious write Geetha!

Fantastic, simply wonderful...........................10

This is superbly composed with great metaphor attached with emotions of love......Geetha.....I really liked it very much....10