Friday, August 29, 2008

An Apple By Any Other Name... Comments

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“The apple, reddish plump,
hanging from rooted branch
beckoning to be taken, tasted
to savor deep, sweet, sweet flesh.”
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Tj Becker 23 September 2008

Absolutely fantastic hahahaha. Sometimes when I read poems the metaphors are so far out there they make no sense yet people will comment ' wonderful use of metaphors' I think if the poem is hard to understand people think it's great haha

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Dawn Slanker 02 September 2008

Okay, I'll bite ;) Interesting poem...like a challenge to partake of your artistic fruit. This is a very nice free verse, well written, and fun to read. Thanks.

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