Thursday, August 9, 2012

An Apology...! ! Comments

Rating: 2.5

Today something occured
it leaves me with a broken heart
with a burden
which subdues my power to reason
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Zaid Akhtar
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Melody Thaila Kuku 10 August 2012

Begging the lover for forgiveness of an err known only to the poet. I love this rhyme part, The act who stole your dimples, which i love as jingles. Overall, its nice Zaid. Keep writing.

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Zaid Akhtar

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