Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Wednesday, August 26, 2009

An Apologetic Gesture Comments

Rating: 4.7

Apologetic gesture and earnest attempts to woo
Do or die approach with resolve to do
I find it very hard and out of it nothing to gain
It adds to tension and worries still remain
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Pradyumna Jyotir 15 March 2010

yes...when we apologise...we are not becoming small...we only necome more magnamous....wonderful write.....thanks for sharing.

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Kelvin Karani 20 December 2009

Apologetic gesture and attempts to woo Do or die approach with resolve to do I find it very hard and nothing to gain Adds to tension and worries still remain well put!

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Nicki Faith 21 November 2009

this is a beautifuly written poem

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Rafique Farooqi 07 November 2009

What do we need in our general dealing? Gentle and mild touch with smooth healing Pages always open and no more concealing Highest regards even when secrets revealing it is very positive behavior towards social life, to remain steady and tolerant and keeping on doing good refuses evils

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Subbaraman N V 04 November 2009

A nice message well conveyed! Thanks.

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Gracey Newman 28 October 2009

Another beautifully written poem :)

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Indira Renganathan 11 September 2009

Nice analysed apology...and your rhythm of words lull the reader....lovely

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Sachin Goswami 10 September 2009

Apologetic gesture and attempts to woo Do or die approach with resolve to do I find it very hard and nothing to gain Adds to tension and worries still remain.........10

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A beautiful poem hasmukh and the rhyme and rhythm work so well! 10 Love Karin

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Alex Andreev 08 September 2009

astoundin lines of yo' poem...10+

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Wilson Branic 07 September 2009

a wonderful and amazing poem.well composed.............

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Anand Madhukar 07 September 2009

A fine lyrical piece.

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Dream Catcher 07 September 2009

A wonderful mix of words, and what you made is a wonderful poem, , , , a wonderful apologetic gesture.

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Jackie Thielman 05 September 2009

i like it great topic... :) Poem Writer, Jackie Thielman

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Raj Nandy 05 September 2009

A NICE AND RHYTHMIC POEM GOOD TO READ! 10! -RAJ

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Pandian Angelina 05 September 2009

One of the most difficult Both to offer or recieve You have tried to express The intent and the pain. A very good attempt To explain something Abstract and unattempted. Angel

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Surya . 04 September 2009

a wonderful and amazing poem.well composed.top marx for you sir surya

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Angelic Warrior 04 September 2009

wow.....amazing! .....a truly fantastic poem.....an apologetic gesture can be one of the best but also the worst.......great write!

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Nizamettin Esen Haymanali 04 September 2009

Beautiful, meaningful, sweet words well penned. Thank you for sharing.10.

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Adens Kamwi 04 September 2009

The first two lines are of the highest order....Brilliant

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