An Antique Script Comments

Well, this was very poetic I read this oven and over to understand this Wow thanks for the dedication........ Poetic and sweet 10

An extraordinary, enchanting poem rich with vivid and beautiful imagery - wonderful!

Beautifully flowing and soulful indeed.

Very desricptive and written with alot of flair...... very nicely done....

meaning escapes me... lost in translation.... or maybe i'm lacking in imagination?

so descriptive and the imagery was amazing. i loved how you brought the seasons into this poem and questioning each if entree would be allowed if you weren't x, y, or z. thought it was cool. i'd give it a 15/10. thanks! ta ta -Every rose starts out as an ash-Ashes 2 Roses :)

Interesting work, very unique. Enjoyed it. Jim

Spacious imagery in small words. Very nice writing.

very creatve one, a pleasure to read it.Great

Catches interesting pers[ectives of animals

a clever write..gems and animals..described well..

a very good realistic poem to read

wow i luv it all ur poems are so awesome keep writing

A nice poem but I could'nt connect the first 16 lines with the rest of the poem. Take care of Wren and Martin- Replace North, South, West and East with Norther, Southern...etc.

So much sadness amongst so much beauty. Good discription but will the mystery be revealed.

creative one dude...............liked t...........lines done with a perfect rhyme.........10+ sebastine

You have done A good job

Its very good it reminds me of the rainforest! ! !

What a wonderfull way of seeing things! Thanksgreetings from Friesland Boomfriend Ruerd

The first four stanzas in their res[ective last lines carry my comments...a poem painted in colourful verses....a bewitching aesthetic...congratulations