Wednesday, February 10, 2016

An Ant Bit Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

An ant bit Me.
A tiny thing,
a little thing,
so small a thing-
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Howard The Motivational Poet Simon
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A beautiful, philosophical poem. The ant may be tiny but its capacity to bite is immense. Just shows that we cannot under-estimate a being on the basis of its size. God has made all beings on this earth worthy. Let us learn to treat all alike with love and respect....As always a poem with a great message, Dear Poet Howard.....10

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 January 2020

Learning from the ant to gain wisdom! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Khairul Ahsan 02 January 2019

The poem has a clear message- 'Live and let live'- and the best way to do that is to learn to forgive even when we are in 'big pain'. Loved this inspirational poem, but sadly, I cannot rate it, as the rating system seems to have disappeared, or is there some fault with my PC? :)

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 September 2018

Beautifully crafted and masterfully executed.10+++

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 September 2018

A wonderful poem with a meaningful message. Everyone has his own strength. We could never understimate the capacity and power of anyone. A tiny dust can make us temporarily blind.

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Susan Williams 19 May 2018

I enjoyed the underlying deeper message of this poem- I really did... it's just that an ant bit my tongue and my tongue swelled to the point I had to go to the emergency room and I guess I have a vindictive streak because I whoop up on any ant wandering into my house now! ! On a higher plane, I live and let live ants and spiders and other creepy crawlies who live outside and stay there... I think my higher plane is tilted...10+

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Valsa George 24 March 2018

Through such an insignificant occurrence like the bite of an ant, what lofty ideas you give for mulling over! Even the insignificant can produce visible results, a mighty man can be made helpless by even a tiny creature, forgiveness is better than punishment.... an attitude of tolerance and a policy of live and let live should be our guiding principle etc, etc! Powerful write! (10)

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Akhtar Jawad 18 January 2018

In this infinite world we are also like a ant and we are biting the nature.

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Elena Sandu 29 July 2016

Wow! This is such a great treasure, a best lesson for my human soul, thank you for sharing!

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Ramesh Rai 25 April 2016

Ant is very small but it can an elephant in trouble. I have seen only creature who can carry more than her weight. God has made with all features as required for a life.à So, certainly it will be more unique and strong. Thanks for sharing.

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Bharati Nayak 16 February 2016

'Small can do large Big can feel small, Surely an inspirational lesson.Thanks for sharing.

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Souren Mondal 13 February 2016

Small, simple yet very profound.. This a wonderful poem Howard.. Thanks for sharing :)

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Bri Edwards 11 February 2016

ants and other small creatures make fine grist for the poetic mill. i enjoyed this very much. i did wonder about the meaning of big can feel small, . i can't say i love ants, but i would rather have a thousand tiny ants (not the big ones!) on our kitchen counter, than one lousy, loafing relative camping out in our living room. well.................it depends on how cute she is. :) :) i liked the sharp rapid lines. long/strong was especially nice. :) bri it it were a lion, would you let live and forgive and love? ? ? to MyPoemList

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Nosheen Irfan 11 February 2016

Very profound poem. The pain was big...the memory long. Beautifully expresses the impact of a small thing on humans. And what makes this poem a very special one is that the biting of an ant usually goes unnoticed n is soon forgotten. Only a poetic mind like yours can turn the ordinary into extraordinary and can derive a lesson from the trivial. In the beginning the hurt may cause rage but gradually when the feelings subside n you think with a clear head, even the hurt was for your own good. Well penned.

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Kelly Kurt 10 February 2016

I agree with this perspective. Well done

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 10 February 2016

just imagine when a ant does bite at ones tip and particularly elephant's then see what happens 'tis no fun

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Rajnish Manga 10 February 2016

There is an old Hindi couplet which deals with a similar subject. It says that a sword cannot do what a small needle is capable of doing. But you have added another dimension to it- ant-bite pain and 'Live and let live- Love even ant'. Thanks.

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