Tuesday, August 15, 2006

An Answer, Please! Comments

Rating: 5.0

I lay down on my bed, facing the ceiling.
My thoughts are dealing
with problems, floating free,
but still part of me.
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Ernestine Northover
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Andrew Blakemore 10 March 2008

A lovely twist at the end. Mine is tiled so I don't suffer with a peeling ceiling! Great poem. Andrew x

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Uriah Hamilton 12 November 2007

Humor in facing difficult times...how essential....just like friendship, Your friend, Uriah

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R H 19 August 2006

Liked the opening rumination and how you misled the reader then brought us back to the mundane! Clever stuff! Justine

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Chuck Audette 18 August 2006

Who papers a ceiling? There's another question for you...Fun switch-up! -chuck

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Cecil (cj) Krieger 16 August 2006

Peeling! God how I hate scraping! ... Very nice Ernestine

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 15 August 2006

ERNESTINE...WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN...MISSED YA'....SOLID PENNING HERE, LACED W/ CLEVERNESS & WIT! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK/fjr

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Lori Boulard 15 August 2006

You got me with this one. Here I was searching for worldly answers, and I got a big laugh instead. Just what I needed! Take care, Lori

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Brian Dorn 15 August 2006

Ernestine, that figures, one more thing to think about... great ending! ! Brian

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Daniel Tyler 15 August 2006

Very honest, Ernestine and strong rhyming punctuates. Well done.

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Take a breather, Love.....go do something nice for yourself....and just walk away from it all...for just one hour....

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Duncan Wyllie 15 August 2006

Dear Ernestine Thankyou for sharing this, I hope that you find the strength, This is so strong in emotion and as always you say it so well, really connecting with the reader Love duncan X

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