I lay down on my bed, facing the ceiling.
My thoughts are dealing
with problems, floating free,
but still part of me.
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Humor in facing difficult times...how essential....just like friendship, Your friend, Uriah
Liked the opening rumination and how you misled the reader then brought us back to the mundane! Clever stuff! Justine
Who papers a ceiling? There's another question for you...Fun switch-up! -chuck
Peeling! God how I hate scraping! ... Very nice Ernestine
ERNESTINE...WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN...MISSED YA'....SOLID PENNING HERE, LACED W/ CLEVERNESS & WIT! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK/fjr
You got me with this one. Here I was searching for worldly answers, and I got a big laugh instead. Just what I needed! Take care, Lori
Ernestine, that figures, one more thing to think about... great ending! ! Brian
Very honest, Ernestine and strong rhyming punctuates. Well done.
Take a breather, Love.....go do something nice for yourself....and just walk away from it all...for just one hour....
Dear Ernestine Thankyou for sharing this, I hope that you find the strength, This is so strong in emotion and as always you say it so well, really connecting with the reader Love duncan X
A lovely twist at the end. Mine is tiled so I don't suffer with a peeling ceiling! Great poem. Andrew x