(This poem is dedicated to my friend who feels that her birth was responsible for destroying a happy family)
Up above in the heaven,
It hurts; I do cry,
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to you and your friend please read beauty of a princess on my list.....and great write, , , , , , , .i like da dedication....
Thats sad for putting herself in such a position.The anguish of believing that you are the scar of a healing wound, a constant reminder.But its not her fault, fate present us with the course we need to follow and we dont have a choice, how we follow it, its up to us.Almost 1: 3 people feels this way at certain stages of their lives in the whole world.Keep writing you awakens a lot of people.
Thats sad for putting herself in such a position.The anguish of believing that you are the scar of a healing wound, a constant reminder.But its not her fault, fate present us with the course we need to follow and we dont have a choice, how we follow it, its up to us.Almost 1: 3 people feels this way at certain stages of their lives in the whole world.Keep writing you awakens a lot of people.
Your empathy, expressed in this poem is great. I really feel that you are not only a wonderful poet but also a fantastic human being. I am sure this poem will be a of a lot of help in the healing for your friend We pray for her (and for anybody in her situation) and I am sure she (or they) will find lots of strength. Keep it up.
a sad thought that someone would belame themselves for such things, its a great piece
such nonsensical beliefs are spread in India and in other asian countries. we have to write against it and make people conscious about the facts of such beliefs. sad thing is that we bring God in between. it is sublime duty that you are doing as a poet to tell people such thoughts are bad.spread the message and bring back our society to normal thinking. thank you for this good work.
Before I formed you in the womb I knew you Before you were born I sanctified you... From the matrix of the womb, He has made mention of my name. Preetam, what a heartfelt write. No words can describe how I felt after this read... Love D