An Angry Sea Comments
As the sea rose up and down wind and tempest tossed
Hands on board began to shout we'll be forever lost
The captain of the wavering ship began to take a stance
Set the sails and man the helms there'll be no other chance
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A great story teller I see. Well written and I enjoy your poems.
Most impressive. In its simplicity it contains great depth and thought.
A particular event that is shipwreck is beautifully made as poem and all its seriousness and happenings.
Absolutely beautiful poem.It was as if I was on that ship before it was abandoned.Very visual and detailed.Love it!
Lovely imagery about the fearful sea, I could feel the fear within the crews of the ship. The detailing was captivating. You may read my poem The wild waves
wonderful poem the curse of Almighty through sea a formidable jaw to engulf .....
Amazing poem. I could see the fear of the crew in your poem..very vivid writing..
Nice and captivating imagery ma'am! I felt like seeing Life of Pie!
as they saw the ship sinking below the wave, they knew right then that GOD had came how else could they have survived if he had not been by their side.
Lord open wide seas for us, own captain to choose our own way to find our destination...in every way we may choose we may find challenges before we ended the journey...though fate was written but He is fair enough to let us try and pick what we want to do...to reach our final destination later, that fixed and unchanged_Soul
you are a brilliant writer by read this poem, I can feel the true power of the ocean as you describe truly extraordinary
what a brave story, the sea the lord all elements was just bright and nothing was missing a perfect piece...nice job ma'am
jumped overboard and stuck together When the ship sinks in rough seas, must stick together and leave the ship to survive. Nice poem.
a great write that reveals the importance of the wise decision to abandon a ship at the right moment. good work Pat.
The Sea is a ferocious adversary which has claimed many a matey's life. Nicely written Patricia.
A turbulent sea is pictured in all its ferociousness! How the sailors on board grapple with the impending danger and in rafts sail down to safety! A very imaginative write! I invite you to read my poem My Voyage!
Pictorial quality of this poem is awesome. It is represented as a moving scenery before the readers' eyes. Nice!
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7/21/2025 7:00:52 AM # 1.0.0
Again i read this poem, and its beauty never fades..thats what i can feel and thats what i cant deny...Beautiful wonderful poem :)