Sunday, June 19, 2011

An Angry Fire Comments

Rating: 4.3

It begins small like a burning ember,
what starts it you cannot remember.
The more you feed it the brighter it glows.
Feel it... as the fire grows.
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Haley Akin
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Raeanne Furfaro 17 August 2011

Very nice. Good imagery of the burning you feel within., I like this one a lot. short but exactly the right length for the prose. Well done.

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Juan Olivarez 29 June 2011

Another good one Haley, good rhyming scheme.

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