Friday, December 26, 2014

An Angelic Figure Comments

Rating: 5.0

There came the Santa
Carrying with him
—— At the strides of his beloved reindeers
On his golden sleigh of hope ——
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Ahmad Husain
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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 January 2015

Distributing happiness during Christmas is definitely a great task. Your poem is very beautiful that touches heart again and again. Excellent work shared. Awarding 10 marks out of 10

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Khalida Bano Ali 30 December 2014

Beautiful and amazing....................10

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Muhammad Farhan Ahmed 28 December 2014

I usually do not read rhyme-less poems but the excellently vivid imagery and imaginative ideas really forced me to read it all up. :) Excellent poem. BTW I read your sweet messages. Thank you a lot for them :) You said that you like Urdu Poetry. Then you must be a native of Lucknow, right?

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Akhtar Jawad 27 December 2014

An amazing poem at this early age...............10

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Ahmad Husain

Ahmad Husain

Gaya (Bihar) , India
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