Sunday, March 18, 2012

An Angel Slaps Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

As sharp as a tack.
Like a slap in the face.
Do you know the kind
tongue blind
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Mike poet
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Valerie Dohren 30 March 2012

Love this one Mike, pity she is not your Angel.

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Wahab Abdul 19 March 2012

''As sharp as a tack. Like a slap in the face. Do you know the kind tongue blind takes away your taste.'' It is the tongue which is blind killing the taste, what an irony, juxtaposition and paradoxical! Very good use of the poetical devices in the poem, these characteristics bears the traits of the modern poetry, i like the poem as like mine.

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