Tuesday, May 2, 2006

An Angel On The Street Comments

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My eyes on a gorgeous goddess
transfixed, transfigured, I couldn't turn nor twist
by the chants and charm of her hairs and eyes
her eyes like emerald, brighter than Liberian diamonds
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ifedayo oshin
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Erhard Hans Josef Lang 14 September 2006

This poem holds the very description of my African dream girl that I hope to finally meet one fine day yet in person... thanks for this enchanting portrait, though fictive it may be.

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Goldy Locks 02 May 2006

excellent, rhythm, description...tone, feeling. i could picture her & the space she took. keep them coming! luv, sus

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