Monday, January 20, 2014

An Angel In The Night Comments

Rating: 4.9

In the misty moon -lit night an angel did alight
Peeped me through the window-
With my beloved holding tight.
She was smiling at me with a gleam in her face
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Amitava Sur
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Stephen Katona 20 March 2015

I would love to read 'An Angel in the Night II by Amitava Sur' in which Amitava talks and laughs with his beloved angel and sees no distance between them anymore. Perhaps you might feel able to write such a continuation after reading 'Death is Nothing at All' by Henry Scott Holland. I hope reading it brings you comfort and joy.

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Ken E Hall 29 July 2014

Births anniversary brought you an angel so sad when one loses someone close...your saving star will join you together one day thats what I feel in this lovely poem...regards

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Akhtar Jawad 10 July 2014

I have read many poems on a birthday but this one is different in style. Although too late but I wish many more to lovely Amitava. I expect next time I shall read another beautiful poem from Amitava.

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Kirti Sharma 28 June 2014

belated Happy Birthday sir... your work is really brautiful... each line makes the reader feel how much you are missin your loved one..

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Yash Shinde 06 April 2014

.this work reaches heart.and comes straight from your heart...........lovely descriptive write....... You may like- - Rosy lay

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Amitava Sur 04 April 2014

Thank you respected poets for liking the poem

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Roseann Shawiak 28 March 2014

Amitava, beautiful, sad, some joy, all in one poem. Got a lump in my throat and tears in my eyes. Wanted you to be able to hold on to her, but the angel took her away from you again in your poem. Totally loved it, Amitava, it's a perfect 10. RoseAnn

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Valerie Dohren 21 January 2014

Oh, meant to say hope you had a great birthday, and many happy returns.

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Valerie Dohren 21 January 2014

Very beautiful and poignant Amitava. Those of us who have lost loved ones can relate to this, yearning to see them again.

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Kanav Justa 21 January 2014

this a beautiful poem, , , laden with emotions and your love for her even when she is not here with you, , , , great write

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Shahzia Batool 20 January 2014

Happy birthday, and i join Valsa ji in her wishes and prayers...the poem has a deep touch of nostalgia...the lines added in quotation marks are adding a dramatic element into this passionate write up!

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Valsa George 20 January 2014

Amitava, first of all let me wish you a very Happy Birthday and a year ahead of joy and success in whatever you undertake! This write has really touched me.... I can feel your pain and your sense of loneliness! Be comforted at the thought that at least in your dream, you got a glimpse of her! By next birthday, may someone come into your life to give you cheer! !

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Noreen Carden 20 January 2014

A really lovely poem with a sad story to tell The angel brought me this night to see you and to tell i was always yours and still i am thine. A very emotional poem lovely to read

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