Not long ago I saw her,
As in her younger days.
She sat upon the fresh green grass
As I could only gaze.
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I love this. It leaves me just smiling. Big smile. You did a really good job. Was it work, or did it come easy? Did it take long, or did you just write it out? Did it just come to you or did you think about it for awhile? Was it out of the blue or was it inspired? Sorry for all the questions. I ask alot of questions when I get excited. :) Childlike yes, but I learn alot this way! Debbie
wow, what an angelic classic. beautifully written. the imagery was superb as I flew alongside you.
A unique story...elegantly crafted in poetic form...very nice...10
Story Teller and Poet, your Poem reads perfectly. Beautiful thoughts, Loving Angels that await......10
A dream-like romantic poem. Rhythem, rhymes, stanzas all so beautifully placed and well worded. A relaxing and enjoyable read. Best Wishes Naseer
Once again the romantic in you has transported us on another adventure in love...T
I felt you taking to the skies and above, riding the wind in the company of an Angel...really beautiful. I am captivated by 'flights' of ? fantasy and wrote some myself. Well Done. Cindy
wow........is that how it would feel to fly with an angel? wonderful write
That was wonderful. You can tell it came from the heart....It made me sort of sad reading it because of the feeling of loss but it also made me happy because you know she was there with you even after death. True love can not be separated, in life or death. Wonderful poem.
wow, what a lovely poem... hope your angel will be back one day... Hataw
wow...beautiful poem...wonderful imagery... every lines painted a vivid picture brings lightness to mind and heart.. the lines are flowing sweetly and enchanting... very tender another great piece from you....10++++ _maia_
An angel of a poem goes straight to the heart imagery of imagination luvli regards uavanice1+++++++++++++++10
Very very nice work and just shown the creativity what it is. Angels never come we have to go and make it. Some one some day theft me. Angels always live for that someone.10 +++++. I feel the angel may rested with you for ever.
Wolfey, I can tell, - 'excellent'- but, it not that word by... This romantic poem one of best of yours verses... The Truth! Tsira.
nice... this is hot. i could see her know....i like this very...more fire!
Perhaps she has found a new home...in your heart All the best GW and this one is truly beautiful, , what a vision Love duncan X
Very beautiful poem...