Looking down on a world
of violence and spite
an angel cries
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Your poem is simple yet deep and full of truths and emotions! Great job!
Well conceived and elegantly brought forth. Thanks for sharing Dave.
How can civilization live like this This was gods creation not gods damnation.So true dear poet........ when we hear and read in the news paper about the murder, bombling, killing of innocents.......... we all cry out God where are you? thank u for this poem. tony
an angel cries, indeed we live in a world where the angel cries. Good write. enjoyed reading.
an angel cries along the tearless cries of every harassed soul of this planet......indeed true...
Cries for the children in a nation of fears Cries for the people who should have been their savior beautiful dave enjoyed reading
yes true dave an angel cries Cries for the children in a nation of fears Cries for the people who should have been their savior
Angels make sudden and unexpected appearances in some of my poems. And I have encountered them in many other poems by poets at Poemhunter. And now yours, with the angel helpless to stop or reverse our human behavior but filled with grief for its cost to humanity. There's more than poignance here, there's an undercurrent of anger that we have allowed this to happen. But I don't want to surrender to that anger. Far better to write a poem like yours which shows the compassion of this pure being and by her/his/its example points toward a happier reality. That's what your angel, and my angel and all of our angels do - they point the way.
Beautifully written and very heartfelt. Angels do cry and feels our fears and concerns. I love this poem Dave.
Very well said Dave. This is the real crisis of today. Thanks for sharing. You may read my poem Humanity is at stake
this one to me seams to a message from the heart rated it 10
simple in content but it say a lot.brilliant work.jk
touching. this is a wonderful poem sir. keep up the good work. i love you
The angel shall ever cry for the children in a nation of fear. xlent and outstanding poem.
Like the poet if there is an Angel within a man, the angel will cry on the violence throughout the world. Loved the poem and loved its message, it has an universal appeal.