Monday, January 23, 2012

An Angel Cries Comments

Rating: 4.7

Looking down on a world
of violence and spite
an angel cries
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Dave Alan Walker
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Akhtar Jawad 03 November 2018

Like the poet if there is an Angel within a man, the angel will cry on the violence throughout the world. Loved the poem and loved its message, it has an universal appeal.

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Christa D 03 November 2018

Your poem is simple yet deep and full of truths and emotions! Great job!

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Chinedu Dike 31 October 2018

Well conceived and elegantly brought forth. Thanks for sharing Dave.

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 October 2018

How can civilization live like this This was gods creation not gods damnation.So true dear poet........ when we hear and read in the news paper about the murder, bombling, killing of innocents.......... we all cry out God where are you? thank u for this poem. tony

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Mysia Hayling 12 April 2018

an angel cries, indeed we live in a world where the angel cries. Good write. enjoyed reading.

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Soulful Heart 12 July 2017

an angel cries along the tearless cries of every harassed soul of this planet......indeed true...

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Ernest Makuakua 16 January 2016

Cries for the children in a nation of fears Cries for the people who should have been their savior beautiful dave enjoyed reading

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Ernest Makuakua 16 January 2016

yes true dave an angel cries Cries for the children in a nation of fears Cries for the people who should have been their savior

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Daniel Brick 20 March 2015

Angels make sudden and unexpected appearances in some of my poems. And I have encountered them in many other poems by poets at Poemhunter. And now yours, with the angel helpless to stop or reverse our human behavior but filled with grief for its cost to humanity. There's more than poignance here, there's an undercurrent of anger that we have allowed this to happen. But I don't want to surrender to that anger. Far better to write a poem like yours which shows the compassion of this pure being and by her/his/its example points toward a happier reality. That's what your angel, and my angel and all of our angels do - they point the way.

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Patricia Grantham 28 February 2015

Beautifully written and very heartfelt. Angels do cry and feels our fears and concerns. I love this poem Dave.

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Brian Stafford 12 February 2015

very true, well said.

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Amitava Sur 29 August 2014

Very well said Dave. This is the real crisis of today. Thanks for sharing. You may read my poem Humanity is at stake

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Robert Beck 19 December 2012

Satan has his way, that's is the direction today.

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Sharron Stephenson 15 June 2012

this one to me seams to a message from the heart rated it 10

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Marites C. Cayetano 15 May 2012

simple, but says so sad reality, nice poem..

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Jayachandran Chakrapany 23 March 2012

simple in content but it say a lot.brilliant work.jk

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Justus inspire 03 February 2012

great poem with deep meaning

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Dave Dafes 03 February 2012

so touching, and very creatively written

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Olujobi Jedidiahz 02 February 2012

touching. this is a wonderful poem sir. keep up the good work. i love you

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Ramesh Rai 31 January 2012

The angel shall ever cry for the children in a nation of fear. xlent and outstanding poem.

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